TEACHER FEEDBACK

Some suggestions for you:
Try and revisit the music so that the different types go from one to the next more smoothly. At the moment it is quite jarring the way the styles change so abruptly.
Some of the shots go on for too long , such as the scissors shot. Try and edit for a greater variety of shot types, being sure to keep an eye on continuity throughout.
Also, I would trim down the title card shots as they are taking up quite a lot of your running time at the moment.